Writing Online shopping

优秀作文评分标准（20~25分）

要点齐全，内容丰富，思想健康深刻。 词汇丰富、句型多变、语法高级。

副词、连词的使用，使得文章结构严谨，思路清晰，过渡自然。 字体认真美观，卷面整洁。

如今，网购（online shopping）越来越普及，请你谈谈网购的利与弊，并阐述你的观点和做法。词数100左右。 审题：

1、Outline:引言段+利弊+个人观点及做法 2、Tense:一般现在时 1.Introducton

(nowadays/these days /at present online shopping more and more popular) 2. Advantages & disadvantages

( on the one hand/ some people think …) (on the other hand / other people think …) 3. My opinion & action. 参考词汇：

引言：nowadays, recently, these days become more and more popular more and more people prefer…

利： shop on line, purchasing goods; convenience; at a lower price; there is no need to do sth.; search for; save time; save energy; what’s more, click the mouse,

弊：can’t see the products; fake; know nothing about the quality of..; be afraid of…, get cheated; credit card; money loss.

总结段: from my point of view, it is my choice that…; pay attention to… 常用句型： 1.总起

⑴Different people hold different opinions.

⑵People have taken/ adopted different attitudes towards… ⑶People have different opinions on this problem. ⑷Different people think it differently 2. 表达不同观点

⑴…of them hold the opinion that…

⑵People who are for/ against the idea think… ⑶Some people believe that… Others argue that… 3. 不同观点之间的衔接

⑴However, …of them hold a different view./ …of them hold the opposite opinion. ⑵However, each coin has two sides.

⑶On the other hand,…people object that…